The Repetitive breath..
of the ocean..
calls me to enjoy her
fathomed beauty..
Diving into her..
proudness..the danger..
the waves..
I, merely a shadow
among her great
black waters...
Silence..a passionate state
man has been abode with
to relinquish..
I succumb to her..
mystery..the sea..
I am reborn
from within the waves
as a new born..
takes the first breath..
I am pure and fresh..
Ready once again
to believe and breath..
2023 මොකද වුනේ?
3 months ago
4 comments:
that's a very nice creation there bro !
hi first off ..i gta say this poem is very nice and touching..
i think the sea you are talking about is a girl..and in her you could find the love and life once you lost within something else..so it gives you a new hope and hunger for life which is almost a new life and new perspective ..yet it is mysterious ..nobody can say what the sea holds ..and the poet is wondering what this beauty silently holds..yet who can refuse an end to the emptiness so one could risk his life again to find something to live for ..
i don't know what you tried to say with this one lol but as a readon I'm free to interpret it in my way right..keep writing you got a gift
@ nash - thnx ayya
@crown - whao totally different perspective!! atcually this is sort of the only poem i didnt write abt a woman!! this is just the sea..its something i experienced while having a nice time in benthota..the emotions of the sea..but u just gave a whole new meaning to it..amazing..thnx ayya :)
WONDERFUL...BEAUTIFUL....:D
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